My first bash at home recording

constructive crticism welcome!

it's called 'Dusk Song' its an instrumental I just kind of built up til i was happy. Done on an Epiphone Sheraton through a Digitech RP3, acoustic at the end is a yamaha cj12 with a bridge pickup and th keyboard is a Yamaha cheapo thing. Drums were done in fruity loops.

Let me know what you reckon, considering its a first attempt!
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/david.sarson2/ DUSK_SONG.MP3

Cheers

Nice one mate, liked the backwards guitar parts. If it was my tune I'd make the acoustic guitar bit a little longer at the end and fade it out rather than stop dead. I just wish I could program a decent drum pattern in Fruity Loops, every time I fire it up I turn into Techno Man!

cheers